Bad Grammar: Former Rapper Jailed For 1999 Shooting Speaks Out

 

Background

This is the E! News Channel. This video discussed the former Badboy Records rapper Shyne, who was sentenced to a 10-year prison term for his involvement in a night club shooting. The 1999 incident also involved Sean ‘Diddy’ Combs as well as Jennifer Lopez who was his romantic partner at the time.




My Comments

This title has several problems. First, it does not really convey any actual meaning and consequently sounds nonsensical. This is further worsened by the grammatical error that finishes the sentence.

What exactly does “…shooting attended by Diddy and Jennifer Lopez…” mean? Diddy and Jennifer Lopez were clearly not attending a shooting and I am sure they were not invited to one. This is a very confusing and even misleading title that clearly demands a rewrite.

Then there is the grammatical error at the end of the sentence. Once again, this is a subject-verb error, which is very widespread on YouTube.

The subject of the sentence is ‘rapper’ and the verb is ‘speak.’

A singular noun should be followed by a singular verb. Singular verbs typically end with the letter ‘S.’

So the correct and edited form of the title would be:

“Former rapper jailed for 1999 shooting speaks out.”

A complete rewrite which may be too long as a YouTube title would be:

"Former rapper jailed for a 1999 shooting, which took place at an event attended by Diddy and Jennifer Lopez, speaks out."




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