Bad Grammar: Kellyrae and Sooj Win Immunity to the Finals
Background
Glory Elijah is a popular content
creator who concentrates on Nigerian and African reality TV shows. She has over
300,000 subscribers on YouTube. This video discusses a topic from Big Brother
Naija Season 9, themed: 'No Loose Guard.'
My Comments
The sentence "Kellyrae and
Sooj wins immunity to the finals" is plagued with a couple of grammatical
and contextual ambiguities. First, there is a subject-verb agreement problem: a
plural subject requires a plural verb. "Kellyrae and Sooj” is a plural
subject. “Win” is the plural verb that should follow it. Note, plural verbs do
not end in “S.”
The phrase "immunity to the
finals" might also be quite confusing, given that it has certain potential
implications. Generally, the word "immunity" means protection against
harm or exemption from something malicious. In medical discussions, immunity
refers to resistance against disease, which here creates an unintended analogy.
It sounds like Kellyrae and Sooj are being protected against the finals, making
the finals something harmful that should be avoided, just like a disease.
Where the word "immunity"
is used in competitive contexts, such as in reality shows, it most often refers
to protection from elimination. A better phrasing could be: "Kellyrae and
Sooj win immunity and move on to the finals" or "Kellyrae and Sooj
win immunity and proceed to the finals."
This better communicates that they
are progressing in the competition and not that they are being shielded from a contagious
next round, which is not the case.
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