Bad Grammar: My Greatest Mistake in Marriage
Background
Vogue Africa is a YouTube interview
channel. It focuses on conducting random interviews with people on the street. The
interviewees are typically Africans from the diaspora with a strong emphasis on
Nigerians living in Europe. Vogue Africa currently has 8400 subscribers and has
posted 335 videos.
My Comments
This sentence is so poorly put
together, it makes little sense. The sentence is too long and should have been
broken into about three parts using proper punctuation marks. It also has a
spelling error, a missing article, missing punctuation marks and a weak verb
choice. This reflects the unfortunate reality of Nigerian content creators. They
are notoriously bad at writing, spelling and textual communication. This is yet
another example of what has become a raging internet menace.
Two correct alternative forms of this title could be:
1. My greatest mistake in marriage.
Please don’t make this mistake. A California-based woman shares her experience.
2. “My greatest mistake in marriage.
Please don’t make this mistake.”- A California-based woman shares her
experience.
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