Bad Grammar: Anita and I Need to Talk About My Age

 

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Classic FM 97.3 is a prominent radio station located in Lagos, Nigeria. It is known for its diverse music programming and engaging shows. Its YouTube channel has over 10,000 subscribers and has posted 167 videos to date. This image is from an interview with contestants on the reality TV show Big Brother Naija Season 9. The theme of Season 9 is “No Loose Guard.”




My Comments

This is another careless, halfhearted work carried out by a media organization that should be setting a high standard for others to emulate. The independent statements in the title are either unclear, poorly arranged or have grammatical problems.

The phrasing of the statement: “Kassia and Kellyrae sneaked to touch” is awkward and confounding. A better way to write this could be: “Kassia and Kellyrae sneaked off to touch (something or each other).” The forward slash ‘/’ after the first statement could be replaced with a vertical bar ‘|.’ This would look better and neater. Alternatively, ending the first statement with a period and starting the second separately would improve readability.

The various errors make the title look strange and unprofessional. When writing a YouTube title, clarity is essential even if your intention is to build mystery and curiosity.

A more correct form of this title could be:

“Kassia and Kellyrae Sneaked off to Touch (something) | Anita and I Need to Talk about My Age”




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